User talk:SqueakBox

Leave a message here and sign with ~~~~, SqueakBox 12:10, 1 Jun 2005 (EDT)

Hi there, SqueakBox...welcome to SourceWatch.

I took a quick glance at your edits to the Javier Solana article. I appreciate the fact that you've added a considerable amount of new material here, but could you tone down the adulatory rhetoric a bit? We don't have the same NPOV policy as Wikipedia, but I'm concerned about phrases such as "widely considered the brightest political mind of his generation, and a brilliant diplomat and administrator," or saying that he and his wife "have 2 gorgeous children." This sort of language makes the article read more like promotional material than careful analysis. I'd appreciate it if you could do some rewriting, taking out the unnecessary superlatives. --Sheldon Rampton 16:51, 23 Apr 2005 (EDT)