User talk:Axosta13

Hello and welcome to SourceWatch,

I'm writing to explain my changes to your edits. I moved the content of the TELEFONICA article to the "discussion" page of Telefónica Telecom, an existing article that follows SourceWatch style and referencing guidelines. I deleted the PEMEX article because it was a duplication of the TELEFONICA content.

Please note that we discourage directly copying and pasting large amounts of text. What you added looks like it was copied from another site. Instead, please summarize, using direct quotes as make sense, and add references as described on this page: SourceWatch:References.

thanks,

Diane Farsetta 11:36, 10 November 2008 (EST)

Hi Axosta13,

Welcome to SourceWatch. I have done some editing for formatting and the references for the Matson article you started. For your information you can see the changes that I made here. With thanks, --Bob Burton 05:05, 18 November 2008 (EST)

Hi I have done some formatting and tidying on the FSP Group page. (Have a look here so that you can see the changes I made and how to use stanhdradised referencing and formatting on further pages that you do. Also, there were a few statements where the specific page number in the report that has been cited should be used so it would be appreciated if you could add those details. with thanks, --Bob Burton 14:11, 20 November 2008 (EST)

New pages

Hi Axosta13,

I noticed that you have created the shells for a few new articles but I was wondering whether you were thinking of companies that we already have pages on. For example:

• you created the Drumond page but this one already exists Drummond (different spelling)
• you created the Abbot page but this one already exists Abbott Laboratories (different spelling and extra word)
• you created the Glencore page but this one already exists Glencore International (extra word in title)
• you created the Monsato page but this one already exists Monsanto (different spelling)
• you created the Primax electronincs page when the company's name is Primax Electronics (with the e capitalised) see http://www.primax.com.tw/

Could you drop me a note and let me know if the existing pages are the same companies that you wanted to add material. If so, I can them drop you a note on how best to proceed.

Cheers --Bob Burton 19:39, 9 December 2008 (EST)

Hi Axosta13,

Thanks - what I have done is add the GlobalCorpWiki badge to the pages where there were pre-existing SourceWatch articles. What I will let you do is to merge in the remainder of the standard sections for a GlobalCorpWiki page into the Drummond, Abbott Laboratories, Glencore International and Monsanto pages. I have also deleted the duplicate pages you created and used the "move" function to change the name to Primax Electronics.--Bob Burton 22:35, 9 December 2008 (EST)