User:Stewart fist

18 May 2009

Stewart, please see the talk page for the article about Frederick J. Stare.

Thanks,

Anne Landman, Tobaccowiki editor

15 May 2009

Dear Stewart,

Please spell out acronyms at first use, then put ad acronym after the name in parentheses. One example is from the article on Donna Staunton. You put in CSIRO without first telling readers it stands for the Commonwealth Scientific and Industrial Research Organisation. I was able to find the whole name and insert it, but it would be best if you included the entire name at the time you first enter the information.

Thank you, User:Anne Landman
TobaccoWiki editor

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Hi Stewart,

Thank you for your astute contributions to SourceWatch on tobacco industry goings-on. Please make sure you reference all information to an authoritative source. I've added a tag in places where statements are made and references are missing.

Please also use SourceWatch's accepted format for references. Here is an example:

Instead of using this: [1]

Use this:

I understand this is complicated for you, so as a substitute you could simply insert the URL of the document you want to cite (e.g., "http://legacy.library.ucsf.edu/tid/cro77d00"), but please DO NOT use the URL of the PDF image of the document. Instead, insert the regular URL, which contains all the reference information on the document, and a link to go view it.

Thanks again,

Anne Landman, TobaccoWiki Editor